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You're Pretty When You Cry by ~DocTekla:iconDocTekla:



Emancipation, the proclamation
Sovereignty, the decree
With more than you could ever dream, mother dear
Won't you give some to me?

                Nomadic gypsy from the moment of birth
                Cries of freedom underly each verse
                Still I'm warmed by a fire of splinters, my child
                Built from wreckage remaining after your curse

Mountains of sparkling gems
Fewer fingers than you have rings
Let me hold that winged bauble, mother dear
I love how the caged bird sings.

               Perched in the lap of luxury
               Made possible by diligence and invested time
               Experience proved you unworthy, my child
               You must accept this little bird as mine

The queue wraps around the corner
Would one be missed if he stepped out of line?
Offer me a symbol of your love, mother dear
I want to possess it and make it mine

              The masses are not faceless
              As many so want to believe
              Think about what you truly desire, my child
              It is none but yourself which you deceive

I'll throw a fit, you know I will
I'll rant and fuss and shout
It's unfair you're so content, mother dear
And I must go without

             A romance built on suffering
            Creates a kiln too hot to fire bisque
             Your perfect model will crumble, my child
             Impulses are destructive within a life of risk

The seduction will be too simple
I'm hoping for sobbing pleas
Your baby Siren has grown up, mother dear
What you won't give, I'll have to seize

            Pleasure is so fleeting
           When pantomiming the dance of glee
            Your need for love is born of hate, my child
            You cannot steal what has been set free
©2006-2009 ~DocTekla
:icondoctekla:

Author's Comments

What mother in her right mind would give away a precious treasure to someone who dreams of only smashing it to bits, regardless of parental relation.

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:iconsardaug:
Nice contrast between the uncontrolled and the bounded.
:iconnaughtyka:
Tekla, this is one of the most amazing poems that I've ever had the pleasure to read...I can't even explain how emotional it made me. Okay, enough of my hormones.
:icondoctekla:
Would you believe it was my first ever attempt at an actual poem? Outside of 8th grade English requirements, that is. Oh, and haiku's don't count. I rule the school when it comes to haiku.

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